Devoted

Devoted

 

She wanted independence,

Young girls often do.

Then she met you,

Changed her credence

-What for?

Another life,

The role of mother and wife;

Every night she waits by the door.

Reviews

[plainme]

so recognizable, we've all encountered moments like that. Short and yet brings a long story behind it. Really great flow

[Balkaran Sidhu]

so very true....sad but true :(

[Inda]

thanks for the R&R!

[KAOlmsted]

It happens this way too often. Very astute.

[Inda]

Yep, thank you!

[KAOlmsted]

My pleasure.

[Carolann Dowsett]

I can so relate to this. It seems a woman has to give up a lot for love just to be left with nothing in return. A great write.

[Inda]

Thanks; yes this happens too often.

[Perri]

Short and sweet, nice flow...was very good =)

[Inda]

Thank you!

[Baby Ricochet]

I like it and it's true. Youth always want independence then they find out "independence" is a bit of an illusion.

[Inda]

Yep, it's all bullshit! Thanks Ricochet.

[quinfinn]

a woman's heart is a deep ocean of secrets and mystery. they are subject to change their minds at any time and for any reason. i mean, what man owns dozens of pairs of shoes? i rest my case. excellent write.

[Inda]

Lol, you speak wise words. They are a unique bunch indeed. Thanks for all the great reviews!