Palms Together

Palms Together

 

Tired souls wait

Both in desperation and faith;

Comforting grounds,

Melody and sounds

Calm

The senses.

Meeting of palms

As fear hides behind weak defenses.

Reviews

[Yellow Butterfly]

Namaste for this wonderful piece of poetry Inda.... :O)

[KAOlmsted]

The power of prayer. Nicely done.

[Inda]

Thanks, but thats not what i had in mind when i wrote this; still people
Seem to like it and appreciate it and thats really all i can ask for.

[KAOlmsted]

My pleasure...I must have been distracted by your new avatar xD

[CreativeStroke]

I love this one Inda! There is a beaut and serenity about this piece that really captivated me, causing me to read it over a few times, just to experience it in full depth. Well done!

[Inda]

Thank you; your words mean a lot. :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Love it Love it Love it. F*****g brilliant. Standing ovation. I've read it like 8 times in the last minute. F*****g flawless man. Outstanding work sir!

[Inda]

Thanks Ricochet! Never gotten a standing ovation before and for that I thank you.

[quinfinn]

i love the way you formatted this and the separation between the lines, like a gentle pause is implied after each one. you are truly on a roll here. very nicely done.

[Inda]

Thank you for your generous review, always means a lot. :)