Zigzag

Zigzag

 

Crossed

that line again;

landed

on a hill of lies and pain.

Lied to myself once more,

love knocked

and I locked

the door.

 

Reviews

[Rachel Anderson]

Simple and elegant. So short, but with so much meaning. I know the feeling, too. Thanks for sharing!

[quinfinn]

if i ended up on a hill of lies and pain ....not only would i lock the door (after i slammed it) i would throw away the key. awesome and clever write.

[Inda]

Lol thanks for such an entertaining review, i apreciate you taking the time!

[quinfinn]

always a pleasure, my friend

[Baby Ricochet]

Short, sweet and to the point. Good one.

[Inda]

Thanks Ricochet

[Inda]

Outstanding poetry dear poet! I can't say more.... you just know always to touch the perfect moment... ;)

- Elisa

[Inda]

Thanks Elisa, means a lot. :)

You're always welcome fine poet! :)