Unclear

Unclear

 

I miss you;

more than I thought I would.

I want to see you,

But I don’t think I should.

I love you,

but it’s unclear how so.

Warmth of mine

why did you have to go?

Reviews

[Quiet Child]

this is yet another great write. i love this one as well.(:

Speaks love out of a heart, that follows his instincts, so beautifully.....
Great writing again my friend.

- Elisa

[Inda]

Thank you all for the reviews, means a lot! :)

[CreativeStroke]

A confusion we all suffer through at some point in our lifetime. Thank you for sharing this one Inda. You penned it nicely.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

nicely penned...the confusion that sometimes we suffer from

[Baby Ricochet]

Kinda reminds me of a country western ballad

[quinfinn]

love is a perplexing and frustrating enigma, n'est pas? when we have it we don't fully appreciate it and when we lose it we can't understand our feelings about why, because of the ensuing pain and self doubt. you have nailed it, in few words!

[Salar Majak]

(Warmth of mine
why did you have to go?)
i really like this part, the longing drips from this in a very simple way, beautiful!!