Hapiness

Happiness

 

Happiness

is forgiveness

and hope;

This allows you to cope

with the tears

and the fears

and the battles lost.

Aware of the cost

of the victories too,

suddenly a smile

and you forget for a while.

Happiness, does it mean the same to you?

Author's Note

All feedback welcomed.

Reviews

[s y e]

This is a great piece, really well written. Good job

[Inda]

Thank You.

[Baby Ricochet]

Awesome! I loves this one! It should be #1. Who's #1 right now? The Blade by Tate Morgan. Actually he's a really good writer and The Blade's an incredible piece but you can usurp him. I'm sure of it. I love little poems like this.

[Inda]

Thanks Ricochet, means a lot.

[Salar Majak]

aaaaah happiness, you gave the perfect explanation for it, it some times fascinate me how feelings get mixed up XD yet happiness seams to be pure as a rose in a field, beautiful!

[Inda]

Thanks Aurora

[Salar Majak]

:D

[Pollai]

Really smooth flow. I like how its very passive until the very end, a strong question to sum it all up. Thanks

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Wow! love the structure of this poem it is brilliant work. the progression is unique and flowing smoothly till the end. the last line fortified the heart of the poem. Thanks for sharing.

[Inda]

Thank you Villaflor, i was worried about the ending. :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Don't worry it connects the dot. it is engaging to the readers because you ended it with question which is very good.