Offer Expires

Offer Expires

 

Tonight I don’t want the moon or the stars,

tonight I don’t care for the fast moving cars.

Forget the nightlife,

the sharp forks and the dull knife.

Tonight is about your skin

and mine and this so-called sin

I call desire.

Hurry though, this offer will expire!

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

Ha! I love it...it's frank. It's like, listen, sweetheart, I prefer the nightlife, but tonight I'm going to spend all of my time and pay you all of my attention, but get it while you can because I'm going back out on the town tomorrow ;-) Clever.

[Holly Mason]

interesting thoughts
they have pills now a days to help with expiring*)*)kidding sir
I do like how the world has been set aside for your so called sin moment-no moon no fast cars just desire
thank you for sharing much

[Inda]

Thank you Holly for such a nice Review!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol :) seems the offer is wont last better to grab it! very honest and vibrant progression telling the truths in life. Thanks for sharing this remarkable write.

[Inda]

Thank you for the R&R

[Pollai]

Loved the buildup to the ending. Nice short piece.

[Inda]

Thanks!