Raindrops

Raindrops

 

I feel

Like I could steal

Your heart again,

Say goodbye to all this pain.

I’m alive and I’ll never die!

This too will subside.

“It’s all just a ride.”

The dirt, the gold,

The young and the old;

The beginning and the end,

The enemy and the friend,

The shadow, the light;

It’s all gray.

There’s no wrong or right,

No home for the stray.

Its ok,

I forgive

Your mistake,

Offer a smile

As I walk away

- unmoved you just wave.

Reviews

[Pollai]

It's nice, and it was entertaining in the middle with the opposites. I like the beginning but maybe a bit more to tie in the middle with the beginning and the middle? (The middle starting at "The dirt, the gold"). Nice write :)