DONE

Done

 

The glass is almost empty

And the bottle too,

What’s a man to do?

Is there beauty

In depression,

Is love just an obsession

Or is there something more?

The thought is gone,

-departs, shuts the door.

The glass is empty, I’m done.

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

You need to go to the Liquor store and get some more. Men easily confuse love and the crazy s**t their dick tells them. Honest, I've been listening to mine for years and it's always wrong in the long run. I like these short little sentenced poems of yours. Thier like resees pieces. THey go down good.

[Inda]

Thanks Ricochet!

[Pollai]

A peaceful conversation with yourself that can get ugly sometimes if you don't know when to be done, nice write :)

[quinfinn]

obsession and endorphins and hormones...all racing to beat the band...if your glass is empty and your bottle is too...it is time for a beer run...drink the next batch down and see if that better suits your tastes. awesome write!

[Inda]

Yep, running out of booze! Thanks for the R&R Quin!