I Saw

I saw

 

I saw,

My neighbor-

the carpenter,

he bought the old,

worn shoes.

 

I saw,

I saw it fall.

Yesterday’s rose-

faded

and hurt.

 

I saw,

saw how the fridge

warms

God’s soul.

-Keeps the milk cold.

 

I saw,

saw I was caught

in a letter;

trapped

in nostalgia, trying to forget her.

Reviews

[s y e]

This is great, Inda - a really powerful write. Loved your play with words.

~ Noodle.

[Inda]

Thanks, means a lot!

[quinfinn]

Inda, i find it a shame that a poet as gifted as you isn't all over the top writers list...i think you are very talented and largely unappreciated for your excellence. keep writing. your time to shine is coming.

[Inda]

Thank you for those kind words, means a lot!

[quinfinn]

i believe what i have stated...hang in there!