Red Eyed

Red Eyed

 

Dire needs,

The Wiseman heeds

a warning,

-the end is coming!

Sleep deprived,

red eyed

and hung over.

Head under the cover,

trying not to awake

and find daylight, yet another mistake.

Reviews

[plainme]

This really spoke to me. I can really see what you're saying, and I can easily stick a story to it. I like this a lot Inda, this kind of writing speaks to me a lot! Short but unfinished, it's so great your head fills in the blanks and keeps rolling the film and keeps rolling the film..

[KAOlmsted]

It's like you're in my head ;-) Nice work, doll.

[K. Louis]

I love the beat of the last 6 lines in this!

[quinfinn]

never comes the day, should you fritter it away...stay undercover and live to see another......nicely done.

[Inda]

Thanks, means a lot!