What Did I Miss?

What Did I Miss?

 

Welcome back,

you missed a lot.

I’ve gotten older,

grown colder,

made more mistakes.

Raised the stakes,

lowered the bar,

ran; didn’t get far.

Reviews

[plainme]

Yes, that's the one. My favourite from your last batch so far! Great write!

[Inda]

Thanks, i enjoyed writing this one a lot!

[K. Louis]

I enjoy the concision of you work...and this is a great example of "less is more"
This could be a self-reflection or a response to someone who has been gone for a long time. Either way, I like the way that is left open for the reader.

[Inda]

Thanks, i'm glad you enjoyed the end, it was a bit of a risk.

[Knightingale]

I think we can all relate to this. This is well written, but more than that, it's honest and from the heart. Thank you for sharing this.

[Inda]

Thank you, means a lot.

[s y e]

Wow, this is an emotional, touching write, Inda. Really well done.

[Inda]

Thanks
Noodle!