Timid Night

Timid Night

 

The night is timid

 and quiet.

 The house is silent,

The moon in hiding,

No light is shining

down the hall.

She’s gone.

-Burned me to the bone.

Such a fool I took that fall,

like a bird takes flight,

still she let me have the night.

Reviews

[Balkaran Sidhu]

What a beauty Inda..."she let me have the night"!

[Inda]

Thank you all for the reviews!

[Inda]

Thank you all for the reviews!

[Quiet Child]

i absolutely LOVE this! it seems like something i would write... wonderful job. ^_^

[K. Louis]

"still she let me have the night"-- Great line!

[plainme]

This is very emotional, it's very strong and it has that punch that I love in your writing. That emotional push that you get after watching a sad movie, that push that can lead you to tears, like a reaction which you've described so very well in this short poem. I love it, Inda.