Play Me Like The Moon

Play Me Like The Moon

 

Condensation

on her window.

Desperation

seems to grow

as deception

begins to show.

 Lying

to me,

I’m trying

not to see

she’s playing

me like the moon plays the sea.

Reviews

[koty bell]

This was great poem ive been there so its relatable too...great work my man simple sweet yet very enjoyable.. Awesome!

[Quiet Child]

absolutely love this! it flows really well and i really like the last line. gives almost an eerie feeling, like there's something left to feel. something to leave the reader on, hooking them in, love it!

[Inda]

Glad you liked it! :)

[Quiet Child]

(: i did, very enjoyable!

[K. Louis]

I LOVE the title to this..and nice touch on that last line.

[Inda]

Thank you!!! :)

[Baby Ricochet]

No doubt. Great poem..................

[Inda]

Thanks. :)