-No!

-No!

 

She was naked,

shaking

her head-

No!

He laughed

pretending

he didn’t know.

She screamed,

kicked

him good,

but he was stronger,

not much she could do.

“Just a little longer

and I’m through with you.”

Reviews

[Quiet Child]

seems like its leading up to something. good piece, whats it referring to?

[Inda]

Referring to rape and both sides shown here; the predator and the victim.

[Quiet Child]

ah, see that's what i though it freferred to, i didn't want to just assume that it was, in fact rape. figured i'd check to make sure first before i made assumption. it a good write though, it has a lot of emotion. i hope you were just writing about this and it wasn't a personal experience for you. keep writing!

[Quiet Child]

referred* (my bad)

[Inda]

Dont worry it's completly fiction.

[Quiet Child]

oh thank goodness! (:

[Baby Ricochet]

This one's kinda creepy. Great impact for so few words. Outstanding work inda

[Inda]

Thanks, it is a creeper, glad you liked it.

[bobc]

I...a very sinister ending. Left me hoping she might land a good one where it counted...bobc

[Inda]

Yeah, that was the point :)
thanks for the R&R