Loved and Lost

-Love and Lost-

You ever feel
Like steel
Melting,
Like someone's disecting,
cautiously tearing your heart
Apart?
That means you've loved,
Hovered
Above the clouds for a second or two.
-What's more there was someone
in the air with you.

Reviews

[WithLoveandLoss.]

The title drew me in, its very similar to my "name" :) I connect deeply with your words, which makes the effect so compelling. Without loss, there cannot be love. Great work.

[Inda]

Thanks for the review everybody, means a lot!

[Dreamer]

I love the power and the word choice for this poem, nice work

[Quiet Child]

great emotional use, actually tasted the metal. it's odd i know. you can connect to it, feel it weave its way into you. wonderful write!

[Inda]

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!

[Quiet Child]

welcome (:

[Baby Ricochet]

Love can be as painful as war. Trust me on that.

[Sasha]

this is amazing ..
keep writing !

[Inda]

Thank you, means a lot!