Goodbye Means...

Goodbye Means…

 

Goodbye

means I’ll die

inside;

sporting a smile.

Love’s a vile

potion

used to rile

up an emotion

-illusions of grandeur,

eye catching wonders.

A cheap thrill,

standing still

waiting,

longing

for your return.

-Meanwhile I burn.

Reviews

[s y e]

This is full of emotion, Inda -- It's an honest write and very well written.

[Distantview123]

An expressive poem, full of emotion and honest opinion. Nicely penned.