Mad man's Sprung.

Nothing,
Except
A feeling
That suggest
He's out of depth.
Losing
His grip,
You strip
Away layers of skin.
Only age and tears to gain,
He's only just begun.
- The mad man's sprung.

Reviews

[Amanda]

I loove the rhythm that this creates when I read it! Such a poet

[Inda]

Thank you so much!

[KAOlmsted]

"Only age and tears to gain..." That is probably one of the most poignant lines I've read in quite some time...the brilliance being in the simplicity. Every now and then, Inda, you really knock it out of the park. That is a Poetry SportsCenter moment ;-) Well done, doll.

[Inda]

Thanks so much means a lot coming from you! :)

[KAOlmsted]

It's my absolute pleasure (and thank you)

[Baby Ricochet]

Good little poem. Sometimes they're the best kind

[Inda]

Thanks Ricochet! :)

[s y e]

Loved the structure of this one Inda - Another great write from you!

[Inda]

Thanks noodle; always glad you stop by. :)

[Laminators Dubai]

That's a helpless but true and powerful write.
Simply amazing inda...
Thanks for sharing this sprung^^

[Inda]

Thanks for the r&r means a lot! :)

[Laminators Dubai]

Its fine....anything for you....