I'm Not Here

I’m Not Here

 

Hiding here between the lines,

the disgust, the tears and crimes.

I do it well or so I’m told.

Always exact and bold,

here on paper and yet gone.

Accompanied and alone,

it’s not hide and seek,

feel free to peek;

 I’ve got no fear,

after all, I’m not even here.

Reviews

[K. Louis]

something in you here in this piece of writing when you wrote this...looks like a place of truth. Tap into that place more...it serves you well. I love the kind of playfulness you had with the reader...like a game...and the way you ended 'after all, i'm not even here'...yes, good stuff going on here.

[Inda]

Thanks, means a lot. Glad you enjoyed this piece.

[Quiet Child]

love this, seems very personal. hope this was not something, you yourself, had to go through. i really adore the usage and its a lovely poem.

[Dreamer]

excellent job..I enjoyed this piece

[Baby Ricochet]

None of us are here. Christ im on the toilet right now

[Laminators Dubai]

somewhat its funny.
when we read....the write must be somewhere else...for me it hiding in the closet...
every single line is awesome!
amazing job ! ^^

[Inda]

Yep, nowhere in sight! :)