A Hobby

A Hobby

A hint of lime

hid the crime

committed here.

Gone

all traces of blood and fear.

In a small box he keeps near

there’s a piece of her skull, when he is alone

he likes to stare at it and reminisce,

It’s just a hobby of his.

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

It's just a hobby of his. -- great line!

Twisted, unusual, but starkly and impressively effective write. I like the concise nature and the tight imagery; I think this is what really makes this one so hard hitting. Nicely done.

[Rita L. Sev]

Kinda like Jeffrey Dahmer... this is twisted, but I like it - so I must be twisted too... ;)

[Inda]

Thanks, it is twisted!

[Quiet Child]

masochistic, but lovely all the same. (:

[Inda]

thank you friend!

[Quiet Child]

You're welcome! (:

[Laminators Dubai]

hahahah
so thats was a hobby.

i solve sudoku....really who am i?.....lol

[s y e]

Ha, that is one strange hobby my friend, kinda made me laugh at how weird it is.

[Inda]

yeah it is weird, thanks.

[Dreamer]

What a strange hobby!
well written though, nice job!

[Inda]

thank you.

[Dreamer]

you're welcome!!

[Pollai]

Creepy but so casual, haha nice

[Inda]

yeah, that's what i like about it. thanks!

[Baby Ricochet]

That's some fucked up hobby

[Inda]

You got that right!