All I Do

Wore you on my skin,
Felt doubts creeping in.
The bitterness of your tears
I tasted
And your fears
-I felt them.
Still, you ask if I remember you?
Darling thats all I do.

Reviews

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

For some reasons, I felt chills while I was reading this. It's simple but straight to the point. Naked emotions overflowing. Few words said but this touched my heart. Thanks for this, Inda. :)

[Inda]

I'm glad it had such an effect, thank you for reading and reviewing.

[K. Louis]

This one is felt, well done my friend..

[Baby Ricochet]

This one's really good Inda. Great poem

[Dreamer]

beautiful poem..nicely penned!

[Inda]

Thank you!

[Dreamer]

you're welcome..

[WithLoveandLoss.]

"Still, you ask if I remember you?/Darling that's all I do."

Very endearing and timeless.I really enjoyed it!

[Inda]

Thanks, glad you liked it!

[Laminators Dubai]

That was amazing inda...very interesting and powerful indeed.
Thanks for sharing^^

[Inda]

Thank you very much for the review!

[Laminators Dubai]

thanks for a great read^^