Moments to Live

Moments To Live

Not enough moments to live,

affection to give,

love ones to hug,

beers to chug.

The hourglass

laughs

as the minutes

add up.

Bolts and rivets

turn to rust.

Waves crash upon the shore,

break away then come back for more.

Distance equals time lost,

youth and innocence are the cost.

Reviews

[外人 (Gaiji..]

vivid images and great musicality, loved it ! The last two verses killed it !

[Laminators Dubai]

you started with fun and ended up with gun!
loved it!
enjoy every moment...be blessed...

[Baby Ricochet]

They certainly are. Good poem Inda

[Inda]

thanks Ricochet!