Amiss

Amiss

Still remember the look on her face,

she asked me to brace

myself.

Still remember the way I felt

when she told me the truth,

said,

"I

am 

no longer

in love

with 

you".

there was nothing I could do,

far less for me to say.

goodbye and good luck

and she was on her way.

My heart was set on fire,

thrown into the abyss,

I hadn't noticed

anything amiss.

Reviews

[外人 (Gaiji..]

i'm sorry, man ! I can only imagine how much it hurt

[Baby Ricochet]

It sucks when they say that

[Inda]

Indeed it does!