That's a wonderful poem, my friend ! You didn't simply caught a mood, you caught the human condition (if you're pessimist) or the men attitude towards it (if you're optimist). That's a masterpiece ! I believe your best poem so far
I love fiction that's gritty and honest and so my stuff is often times like that. I don't have as much free time as I'd like, but i will get to the request in time and appreciate anyone who takes the .. more..