The Silent One

The Silent One

 

Young and quiet,

   Life’s a riot

And she’s the silent one.

Watched all the damage done,

   Yearned

For a lover,

   Cried on his shoulders;

Learned

  Heartache’s all she could feel.

Pain’s the only thing that’s real.

Reviews

[Laminators Dubai]

Heartache’s all she could feel.
Pain’s the only thing that’s real....

this is magnificent my friend!

[Dreamer]

sad, full of relatable emotions.
well penned!

[外人 (Gaiji..]

so sad and sadly such a common thing :( Nice poem

[Inda]

Thank you!

[Baby Ricochet]

Sometimes it seems that way.

[Inda]

Yep, more often than not.

[WithLoveandLoss.]

This reminds me so much of myself. I really connected to this Inda, and that's the greatest gift a writer can give-and receive. Loved it.

[Inda]

Thanks for your kind words Noodle; glad you could relate to this as much as you did! :)

[s y e]

Inda, you are on a roll my friend, this is great work!

[Inda]

Thanks Noodle! :))