Been too Long

Angry at myself,

been sitting on the shelf

for too long,

I've grown weak

-doubts are strong.

And I can hardly speak,

now the dream's out of reach

meanwhile, I'm out of touch,

fragile and soft.

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

I started to feel this way about 6 months after I got discharged from the Marine Corps. You know when you ain't got it any more.

[Blue]

Hmm, I wonder what you mean when you said "been sitting on the shelf", Inda? I think I'm missing a figurative meaning here. I enjoyed the read, thanks for the RR. :)

[Inda]

Thank you for the r&r means a lot, this is about not posting stuff in a while. :)

[Blue]

Ohhh... Thanks, Inda! And hey, would you mind reviewing my poem "Mutual Surrender"? I am not confident about it. I'd like an opinion from a man. Thanks in advance!

[Vidya Bacchus]

I guess a lot of people have this feeling of sitting back while life passes them by.Very nice poem :)

[Inda]

Thanks for the R&R!

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are most welcome :)