Everyone's Fault

Everyone's smiling,
Subtly Lying,

Everyone's living,
Forgetting they're dying.

Everyone's grieving,
Pretending they're dreaming,

Everyone's searching,
Knowing they'll find nothing.

Everyone's playing,
Wittingly losing.

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

Maybe you should look in the glove compartment

[Saddam]

Everyone's grieving,
Pretending they're dreaming,
Everyone's searching,
Knowing they'll find nothing.

This is very nice poem. Love your inspection. Great write.

[Inda]

Thanks for the RnR means a lot!

[Blue]

Well done, Inda! You wrote this with endearing honesty. I read this thrice and I fell in love with the words and the truth they convey. Good rhyming, too. Five rhyming couplets that make a lot of sense! Very thought-provoking.

[Inda]

Thank you so much, i had a hard time with the lastline on this one ao im glad it all made sense!

[Blue]

Not as obvious as it seems, Inda! 'Wittingly losing" is a brilliant line.