This Bottle

The night is dark,
The dogs out of fear-they bark;
The guitarist plays out of tune,
lovers howl at the crecent moon,
The wind is cold,
This wiskey's old
And strong and smooth,
But I'm no drunk. I'll share this bottle with you.

Reviews

[Pollai]

It has been a while since I was on the site, and coming back to see some new work by new is always a pleasure :) As always simple and elegant. I don't drink, yet it struck me with the last line. I would love to see this be turned into a larger piece. I take away a person who is drinking for whichever reason, but not yet a drunk they simply want company. Cheers!

[Baby Ricochet]

I'm glad you know how to share

[Bowers]

A great piece... I love the simplicity of this, yet is is beautiful!
I love the last line, it made me smile :D

[Inda]

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!

[Inda]

Thank you! Always enjoy your imput and I'm grateful for your time! Means a lot.

[Bowers]

your very welcome !!! :D

[Flightless Bird]

I can't pinpoint exactly why I love this, but I do :)

[Inda]

Thanks, hlad you liked it!

[Inda]

Glad********