That Last Moment

A Flash Story! Really possibly the first paragraph of something, we'll see.

I felt the weight of the world on my chest, the tears where heavy and warm;

          

               I kept saying “no” and holding her face in my hands, like a vase. Her lips remained

         

               partly opened; she shivered out of pain. There was something she wanted to say,

          

               but couldn’t.  I didn’t want her to speak, I didn’t want the moment to end; I knew once

          

               it did, we’d be done.

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

Yeah. This needs to keep going. I'm sure you'll think of something

[Inda]

ThAnks Rocochet, i will try to expand on this.

[audrie]

Who knew that such few words could be so sad. . . .very powerful

[Inda]

Thank you for your kind review, means a lot!