You Said Come In

Im in your thoughts right now,
Don't ask me how,
We both know how I got in,
Will I be back here again?
I can bring a smile, a tear,
The thing you love, that which you fear.
If you feel I shouldn't be here,
Remember, you opened the door my dear.

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

The mind is a funny thing, we get curious... things have a way of creeping in there without us knowing.. sneaky things... Very funny and clever write as usual.. I freaking love this one!!

(on a side note.. in the third line, did you mean to have an extra "the".. makes you trip up when reading..my opinion.. (just saying) it sounds better without it.. "We both know how I got in,")

Awesome write.. I am saving this one mister:)

[Mark]

just saying hello and.. my door? ill open again :)

i love this, i dont how you about the idea... which i guess is why i like it so much

thank you Inda for an insightful poem, that will stay with me in reads to come

[Baby Ricochet]

I'm in your thoughts because you're reading this

[Inda]

Yep, you got it!

[Gurdeep...The Lost]

Hmm...good one. This notion can be generalised for each all thoughts that we ourselves create at first, and then regret when they completely overtake us!

[Inda]

Thanks fir the review, glad you liked it!