Words You Kept

There's a moment you regret,
-A misplaced bet.
Some words you kept,
reasons you haven't slept.
tears you've procured,
Such nostalgia you endure!

There's a time and a place
you wish to visit every day.
The moment's gone, past you by,
Let you live, while it died.
You can't go back, can't move foward,
Didn't say I love you- you coward.

Reviews

[Gurdeep...The Lost]

Nice poem. I can relate to it , not specifically to the 'saying I love u' part, but to several times when I did not do or say. what I should have said/done. And this is so true for me, 'can't go back , ca;t move forward'.

[Inda]

Thanks for the review, i think many can relate to this in one way or another.

[AprilRN1210]

those words you don't say, can come back and haunt you.. you regret those missed opportunities and wonder, what if... if only... especially if it is not telling someone that you love them... another nice emotional write sir...

[Inda]

Thanks, been a bit busy, but back to work for me! Glad you liked this one. :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Sometimes secrets can getchya. Good flow. Musical even.

[Inda]

Thanks Ricochet!