A harmless void

Unheeded
And mocked,
Tired voices in the night
Shout the truth,
in darkeness hope is bright.
Opposing intelect is your standard brute.
Forces allign to destroy,
Afraid of a harmless void.

Reviews

[Rene Salinas]

Oh this to me music to my ears and also just to say that it could have been me. This are also my fears personified. Not much else to share with you Inda as words of encorougment as I don't have for this kind of situations in fact now I like them and when they come I befriend them.

Thankyou

[Inda]

Thank you for stopping by, means a lot. I am one who also welcomes these thoughts, but i enjoy playing with them as you can see here. Thanks again.

[Baby Ricochet]

The Buddhist's speak of "the void." I think it's right next to Nirvana. Maybe that's where this is going.

[s y e]

Damn wow, this was amazing and out of this world. There is so much detail in such few lines. I loved it.

[AprilRN1210]

how do you know it is harmless?.... I have to admit, this one is deeper and more "intellectual" than some of your other ones.. makes you sit here and read, re-read, think... scratch your head.. and do it again... I think "they" classify that as "thought provoking"... yep... shaking my head.. that is what this piece is... makes me wonder a lot of things... lots of questions unanswered.. could take this one several different ways... wheeew, me thinks I need more coffee for this... would love to know your "thoughts" behind this particular piece.. if you don't want to give it away, maybe message me with em... definitely have "piqued" my curiosity and intrigued me with this one.. well done!

[Inda]

Thanks April! I' m glad it made you think,
That was the purpose. I am very greatful for your friendship and will review some of your stuff soon! :)

[AprilRN1210]

was the purpose huh?... meanie.. lol (kidding).... (ok slightly kidding)... no worries my friend.. I know you always make it 'round to my stuff.. no hurry.. not planning on going anywhere.. unless you're plan on throwing me in a "harmless void"... :P

[AprilRN1210]

***planning***.. not plan..... geez can a girl get a cup of coffee around this place...