Clouds of Indifference

A Poem by Inda

Looked up at the clouds- indifferent to it all,

Wonder if they too will fall?

Slowly flying by,

No matter the bullets or children that die.

How dare they drift away

As if it's just another day?

© 2014 Inda

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Inda	Thank you all, glad you enjoyed this piece! This review was written for a previous version of this writing Posted 11 Years Ago Thank you all, glad you enjoyed this piece! Rating /100

Baby Ricochet

Natures indifference to man's stupidity. Good one

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Frontier

Really good! Great way of capturing "Nature's indifference" :)

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AprilRN1210

pretty powerful, insightful words my friend... can I add a few suggestions?

Looked up to the clouds, indifferent to it all,
wondering if they to will fall.
Slowly flying by
no matter the bullets or children that die.
How dare they drift away
as if it's just another day....

deep, moving, and in-your-face -makes you stop and think... well done... :)

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Inda

miami, FL

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I love fiction that's gritty and honest and so my stuff is often times like that. I don't have as much free time as I'd like, but i will get to the request in time and appreciate anyone who takes the .. more..