I Write Fiction

Finally awake,
realizing your mistake,
- thinking I cry as you do.
Believing I hurt too.
Those roses I've placed together,
Note whether
They inspire or not,
Flourish or rot.
See that skin you've been wearing,
The heart that's still beating,
Confess it is weak.
Silence's easily broken, yet you refuse to speak.

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

short lines and pleasant rhymes add to the intensity of the flow.. you know I love your ability to say so much in so little.. this one does the same.. clever title.. fiction huh?... I don't know..... because there are parts that I can easily relate to.. usually too late once you realize that mistake.. people need to "speak" and communicate more.. jeez!... another real, moving, thought-provoking write my weird early hours friend..

[Inda]

Thanks my crazy hours friend! I am not great at titles so dont read much into them. Glad you enjoyed this one and took the time to review, will read more stuff from you soon. Hugs!

[LauraraMonique]

I thought this was very good. I love the way it was written. Will be checking back for more of your awesome writing.

Best,

Laurara Monique

[jennifer little]

wonderful poem i really enjoyed it . sorry it took me so long to review it . been busy and my computer freezes up on me . so i am actully catching up on my read request and then im going to turn them back on but you did a amazing job on it said with great passion and had a wonderful flow to it . keep up the good work and keep writing

[Frontier]

I always enjoy your short, cryptic writes. This one cuts right to the bone of disillusionment in love.

[s y e]

Inda I have missed reading you... this is excellent my friend. I love how you can say soooo much in just a few, short lines!