Just a dream

Running down a hall;

dark corridor.

Curved walls on either side,

at the end a flickering light,

reflections of a moonlit sky.

In the distance a scream,

awake in tears, it was just a dream.

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

could be better, could be worse.. I am with BR, rather dream about sex.. kidding aside, nice concise, powerful phrasing that sets the scene and tells the tale vividly.. well done sir!.. so glad to see new writing!.. hope you are having a wonderful weekend my friend..

[Baby Ricochet]

A the old running in the dark dream. Where would we be without it? Personally, I'd rather dream about sex.

[Rachel Anderson]

This is something I can relate to. I have nightmares so often and sometimes I awake in tears as well. For me, this is personal. You're so creative, Inda!

[Inda]

thanks, glead it was something you could relate to, although not at the cost that you revealed, again thanks for the rnr means a lot!