the park's no help

thought the park would help,
really thought it would.
seeing the birds,
the trees,
the colors in the sky
and the light bouncing off the lake.
but, i saw past it,
saw the highway
running along the green's edge.

Reviews

[外人 (Gaiji..]

The eternal contrast: nature and the human experience. I can see towards which one you'd like to head to and which one you inevitably find yourself heading to. I guess that's the 21st century man, my friend :)

[misha]

What an interesting piece. Love the grit behind it. Great job!