what you mean by spring?

I don't know what to tell you really,
I don't live in a metropolis like New York city.
I live in Miami, its summer all year,
the air smells the same, so are the sounds you hear.
spring
seems to bring
nothing but tourist here,
they buy
Heat tickets and beers.

Reviews

[外人 (Gaiji..]

This is indeed something I can easily relate to ! Born in Rio de Janeiro, I know exactly what you mean with "it's summer all year". I guess we don't really have an idea of what a 4 seasons year was meant to look like. When we learn about it, maybe even experience it, it just feels strange.

[Greg Agee]

ive lived in South Fl and spring brings many things. Animal and bird babies. specific flowers. love, your missing it

[Inda]

While i cant speak for your experience here in miami during spring, i was trying to portray that which most of us who live here feel in regard to spring. if you where looking for a poem about birds and flowers and love and all that, what i would have produced would have been technically sound, but not honest, so this is what i did.so i guess i didnt get it, maybe next time.