fragile aspirations

A Poem by Inda

No harm meant

ain't no harm done.

apologies

won't mend a broken heart,

disappointment enters

as an illusion departs.

© 2017 Inda

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Jessica Lima

You know, a broken heart ain't always a bad think. When a heart is whole there's much one doesn't understand. Besides, light can always enter thru the crack of a broken heart. :)

"disappointment enters as an illusion departs" that is so true... :'(

Loved the poem!

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Inda	Thanks for the reviews guys! Posted 8 Years Ago Thanks for the reviews guys! Rating /100

Jessica Lima

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Tazeen Ahmed

Wow!
I agree! Forgiving is not associated with forgetting. You just need to fix it and heal.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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BBP	Bullet write my friend! Sharp and to the point. Nice write. Posted 8 Years Ago Bullet write my friend! Sharp and to the point. Nice write. Rating /100 1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shweta

The subtlety makes this poem a nice one....!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shy Joe

"Disappointment enter, as an illusion departs"

Now that's a great line. Nice poem, thanks for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on April 7, 2017
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Author

Inda

miami, FL

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I love fiction that's gritty and honest and so my stuff is often times like that. I don't have as much free time as I'd like, but i will get to the request in time and appreciate anyone who takes the .. more..