Just asking

And as it all just is,

as nothing becomes

and meaning is lost

and once more assigned;

to no one's surprise

the children live and die

and the flowers bloom too

and why not? I ask you.

Reviews

[Tazeen Ahmed]

and why not? I ask you"
Powerful and compelling lines.
Thank you for sharing!

[Inda]

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

[Tony Jordan]

and why not indeed.
A light airy write Inda
:)

[Inda]

thank you, glad you liked it!

[Shweta]

The order and disorder..n dat nothing is permanent is well conveyed in a short way..the theme is also good to make it more clear and apt!!
-shweta

[Inda]

Thanks for the review! :)

[OneAmongstMany]

'and the flowers bloom too'

Lovely stuff, lots of feeling in such a short poem. Good work, keep it up!

[Inda]

thank you for the review, glad you liked it!