The sting

The "second brain"

betrays.

the skin akin to sin

be damned!

They stray,

hands and lips

with another lay;

indulgent, widening hips.

This skin

betrays

washed,

still it stays.

Reviews

[soulful sinner]

wow. this is intense and I love the subtle sensuous themes. it's amazing.

[Jessica Lima]

I am still trying to figure out what it all means but I definitely like the flow. Should my mind be on the gutter in a sense?

[Inda]

Lol yeah the gutter should help in this case. :)

[Jessica Lima]

haha. Ok then!!! didn't want to a*s-u-me... lol

[Shweta]

There are some beautiful lines used here like " the skin akin to sin". I liked this one where the reader is left to comprehend and imagine...for me its gritty and perhaps erotic too....!!

[Inda]

Thanks for the RnR glad you liked it!