Reflection

Waves arrive at the shore

Tired of such

   entanglement.

Your enamored stare;

   Like the moon

Stares at the sun.

 

In your hair you retain

   White sand and a sea flower.

You adorn my sight

  With a bright reflection.

and the ocean enraged,

      Mirrors our love. 

Reviews

[Shweta]

This is so beautiful and romantic...such tenderness..!

[Richard Layne]

i love how you play the sun and the moon and the waves together as a metaphor. well done

[NebraskaHope]

each line tells a story, I love the authenticity of this poem !

[OneAmongstMany]

This is some beautiful writing, I really enjoyed this.

'In your hair you retain
White sand and a sea flower'

A beautiful line, you've made great use of vibrant imagery throughout which is necessary in shorter works. Well done, keep it up!

[Inda]

Thank you very much! glad you enjoyed it and reviewed it. :)

[Mr.Writer]

Such a beautiful poem Inda!
The emotion, love was very well expressed and the imagery of the flowers and the sun/moon were amazing!
Well done, keep it up!

[Inda]

Thank you for taking the time means a lot.

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :)