A Terrible Love.

Back when there was a lot of pain running through me I wrote many a poem, this was one of my favourites.

Deep inside that's, where she hides,
Deep in the dark, that's where she resides,
In the dark place, she can't see your face,
That haunts her so,
Coz she can't let you go.

Her mouth feels dry,
Look at her eyes and they lie,
Just to keep you happy,
When inside her head,
The pain fills her with dread.

Hate turns to love,
Love turns to tears,
Can her pain burn all your fears?
Or will it hunt you down!
Driving you insane!
Making you take the blaim!
Killing all your joy,
Making you wish you hadn't treated her like a toy.

She dreams about you all the time,
She constantly hopes soon all this will be fine,
It hurts her so much,
Coz your the one she longs to touch,
It's getting in her brain,
Driving her insane.

Her mouth feels dry,
Look at her eyes and they lie,
She'd do anything for you,
But she knows you and her can never be true,
Do you know how she feels?...She hopes and she wills.

What will you do?
She's crazy on you!
She's going mad, and she just can't hide!
She's losing it!
Can't control this pain!
IT DRIVES HER INSANE!
Only you can fix this now.
Save her from herself.
You know how.


 

Reviews

[Spilled Her Guts in Cur..]

wow. Seriously.

[Anonymous Shadow]

stunning.

[Wolfwind Words]

Oh how love twists the emotions of people. they try to do right, but sometimes it doesn't always work out. Such love, this poem lets loose. but when you know it won't work, it turns and warps into the insanity that you speak of. Great writing here. I think you captured a moment in time of pain and love muddled together perfectly. Keep up the good work!