“Sweaty Bodies”

Bodies fly by, top rope breathless, lungs wheeze out for air full nelsoned by two king cobras nesting in majestic nirvana knowing that once all things are said and done we are all going dancing around your grave like a dead/decaying display of decadence when the seven brown skinned men pick back up their flutes calm all snakes shall become even though for that harmonious second I felt like we’d caught a fast one maybe the last one contemporary academics can postulate if anyone ever again will have one

Reviews

[Eileenws]

This is one long sentence. I'm thinking that this must be in India or maybe Africa. Good job.

[мalғy]

Well, I have been mind blown by you again mister, You are very talented.
-Taila

[stephen dillon]

thanx alot

[Frieda P]

Wait...what? Very tricky read, it's one long run on sentence...not sure what to make of this one.

[stephen dillon]

yeah its all really just an attempt to create one specific image

[Frieda P]

Okay I get that, but not sure which image, it is sex or snake charmers? :-)

[CharlyeMonroe]

Damn, that rolls off the tongue nicely, two thumbs up

[stephen dillon]

thanx i really appreciate a compliment coming from an awesome writer like yourself