"Swallow This"

weird and old as hell like circa 2007 when i did not even have a license

"Mandolin roses planted into a sawdust mulch garden growing human jaws with retractable tounges inside of a daffodile jungle where the silence never lets the poetic mumble to the muses, Apolo are you there?, near the garden to lend your thoughts to my ear whilst i set the page aflame with socialiable syllables to start the socialogical consequenses to radioactivate a mental revolution found in a sulfate chemical solution, Now swallow this down into the throat you've always hated more than any throat you have ever hated before

Author's Note

help me get published dang it

Reviews

[AlchemicPlutonian]

This reads so perfectly like 'I could describe this exactly as it should be, if only I could, but I can't so I will. I just did, now f*****g love it.'

And I do.

[stephen dillon]

thank you so much

[ikibala222]

i love this! the train of thought, the impulsive manner and the strange but somehow not strange imagery. my only critique would to be perhaps put it into stanzas so it is easier to read? i love poetry like this

[kublakhan27]

All kinds of neat wordplay in this one...nicely done my friend.

[Frieda P]

You know I love your abstract writes, usually takes me a few reads, always intriguing and food for thought. If you want to get published, you better clean up your typos. Other than that, quite enjoyed this one.

[stephen dillon]

when i submitt them i fx them or when i santo my harddrive

[Frieda P]

Wait....we're not good enough for that?

[stephen dillon]

i'm just lazy

[Frieda P]

Gawd, how hard is spell check? ;-P