"Do Ya' Love Me"

my take on the difference between my style of art and the random untalented hipster "art" of today i usually get lumped in with

Eyes dry and aired from being wide open, like the churchs doors for every wild sinner to confess into the marble walls exactly what no one has been waiting to hear, but with all the confidence in the world dry eyes shakes down the completion of championship thoughtless art like these yippes staring at a Colon Pollock deciding on which color scrambled egg he will buy, obviously the culture is in the cornsyrup captured in carbohydrates and cancerous hormones so survive at your own risk, throw your arms up shout mased potatoe and let your brain do the twist.

Author's Note

idk

Reviews

[Wolfy]

An explosion of metaphor and simile, very visual, think this is one of my favourites today, well done.

[Diane Smalley]

exhausting, stupefying modern life...so well captured! I love the way the last line speeds up the feeling and pulls it all together--it makes the entire piece work.

[Frieda P]

I did before this, now I'm not so sure...ha, kidding. Your writes are always of a totally different caliber probably why I find them so intriguing...I love the Colon Pollock, scrambled eggs reference!

[Lily Mae]

idk? I love it.. I think it's out there and fun.. Open for interpretation by each individual that reads it. I smiled at the last two lines..lol... excellent..x

[stephen dillon]

thanx i really have been getting hateful reviews i mean i just put almost everything on here good or not so much

[stephen dillon]

and i am glad to make you smile

[Lily Mae]

You know there is so much s**t flying on this place lately...and I just choose to ignore it. If I read someones work and it doesn't resonate with me I don't leave a review.. If I feel the need to say something privately then I do so.. Some people just are so full of their own ego they feel they have the right to spew and run.. (sorry, just tired of the s**t) lol...xoxo

[Lily Mae]

:)
xo

[stephen dillon]

yep it is just mean and thats not what a review is

[Lily Mae]

Well some forget this is an online internet site for all people to express their emotions through whatever ways they choose... good, bad or ugly or pretty..xo