Death Alone

I'm falling asleep alone tonight
No one will even notice I've disappeared
Into my bed of dirt and stone
No marking I've even gone below the ground
With the darkness taking my breath away
Until my every breath is gone
The earth crushing my shoulders
And squeezing out my hidden tears
My soul will float away, somewhere far
As my body is left to fend for itself
Just as it drifts into an everlasting rest

Reviews

[dixie]

very deep and emotional subject! i love it! you can tell you've wrote from your heart. wonderful!

[Anita B Jacques]

wow, very deep. So close to the real thing, I'm wordless. A scene to ever lasting death, for the useless body I'm glad you let your Soul go free. A splendid write, from the first stanza to the last, thank you for sharing it with us. God Bless

Anita