Time Runs Out; Words Unsaid

 There are so many words we could say to the world, so many thoughts we've held hostage in our minds. We know we don't say enough to those who matter or those who should matter more. The hourglasses are running out of sand, some more quickly than others, and this is no excuse. Time running out is no reason to prevent the world, or at least parts of it, from knowing our voices. Even if the world melts away soon after they have learned our words, they still knew them.

Reviews

[Mandi]

This is really good. but it doesn't seem like a poem to me.
"There are so many words we could say to the world" Consider changing this to a better start. It just doesn't sound like the beginning. that's just my opinion.
Yes, this is very good!
It could use a bit more work though!
=D Mandi