Aftermath

Last night I had a dream
I was drowning in a stream
Looked everywhere but still no you
Overwhelming sense of deja vu
Then I woke up to find
That again you were no longer mine
Alone on the cold white bed
And I wish I were dead.

Reviews

[Cynthia]

I love the flow of this poem! the rhymes as well! Its sound like a magical ride to me, very short, simple, but direct to the point, I like it :) I love how the dream and reality connects, its fun to read it.
The thing i love most will be the flow, its like a little song :D
Nice Job =D