Boy and Girl {1}

An online conversation between a broken couple. Girl's perspective.

Girl logs on.

Boy logs on.

Girl: hey                                                                          Pleasepleaseplease answer.

Boy: hi

Girl: how are you?                                                                 Say you miss me. Please.

Boy: really good. what about you?                             Should I lie? Should I tell the truth?

Girl: great! everything's great!                                                                            Lie.

Boy: that's good.

Girl: yeah.

Boy: look, i'm sorry, but I had to leave. i couldn't be with you anymore. 

Girl: No, it's okay. I understand.                                              I don't understand at all.

Boy: Are you sure?                                                                                        No.

Girl: yes.

Boy: stop lying. 

Girl: What?

Boy: I know you. I know you're not okay.                                    He reads me like a book.

Girl: Fine. I'm not okay, and I don't understand why you just left me! you didn't even say goodbye!

Boy: I know. I'm sorry.                                    You think sorry's gonna cut it? Think                                                                        sorry's gonna piece my heart back together? 

Girl: why didn't you say goodbye?

Boy: it would've been too hard. breakups are messy.              Not as messy as getting                                                                                                        ditched.

Girl: you're just a coward.                                      Where did all this nerve come from?

Boy: I know. 

Girl: come home. i still love you.                                                         I still love him.

Boy: i can't. i've met someone else.                                                 He doesn't love me.

Girl: but i love you. 

Boy: i knew that when i left. it changed nothing.                                    He's killing me.

Girl: give me a second chance.                                                                        Please.

Boy: i'm sorry, but i have to go.                                                           This is the end.

Girl: no! stay!                                                                                He's already gone. 

Boy: i really am sorry.

Boy logs off. 

Girl: i am, too.                                                                             I love you. Forever.

Girl logs off.

Author's Note

A short conversation between a girl and a boy who used to be together. the italics are the girl's thoughts as she's reading and talking with the boy. i'll be doing a sequel that has the italics in the boy's perspective, so you can see what the boy was thinking too. review? truthfully, please.

if you're wondering where all the reviews went, well, look on page 2. my friend commented a whole bunch on here, and i deleted them all (they were silly), and now its blank on page one. so if you'd like to see the reviews, please skip to page 2. thanks.

Reviews

[KT]

This story really speaks to me, because sometimes when I'm having a conversation with someone on chat or whatever, I don't always say how I really feel. I could be doing really crappy and I'll still tell them I'm okay. Awesome job, very good! The dude kinda sounds like a jerk! lol ;)

[Break The Broken]

aww soooo sad, he should have atleast talked it out!!!! dont leave boy!!!!

[Vertigoingnowhere]

Wow this is really good i love this good job!

[Brenden Moran]

A really good excerpt of some unfortunately common situation. Good Job, kept me on edge;)

[FadingShadow]

wow know how it feels

[grace]

absolutely love it! i love the plot, and the format. its amazing, love it so much! you should do more of these, its so, different then everything else:)

[Mika Haruna]

Ohhhh this is so sad :( i feel reall sorry for the girll....

[Jennifer]

Awwwww :( Its happened to me too

[Thea]

Aw, that was so sad... *sighs* It's really tough having a break up! (Though I haven't experienced it)
Great story...
:)))