Falling

falling for you all over again . . .

Found myself missing you again.

Am I ever going to get the chance to move on?

Love, you know how hard it is for me to resist that smile of yours.

Later tonight I'll regret it all--I'm already starting to.

I can't see past the facade, past the hugs and kisses and hollow promises.

No turning back now, even though I want to.

Great, I think I'm falling again.

Author's Note

yet another poem i am not too sure i like. represents what its like to fall for someone again after thinking you were over them. enjoy. :)

Reviews

[Jenni-Chan]

I know someone who has that problem. all we can do is hope.

[Chantice Barr]

Good poem.

[RG]

Awesome work! Honestly speaking, it reminded me of someone close to my heart and i guess that was the reason i couldn't stop myself from reading it another time. :)

[KT]

LOVE this poem! I love the flow and how relateable it is. :) Great job!!

[LilMissWriter17]

A lovely poem and I love how you've presented it :)

[Sarah E. Pearson]

I really like this poem. It could use a tiny bit of tweaking here and there to make the flow more fluid, but i really do like it. I actually feel like this right now. So I can relate to it alot.

[Nath]

I like the way it draws the reader in at first, makes them fall along with you.
The last line is, in my eyes, a two-edged sword.
It can complete the process with the realization of what's happening if you are in deep enough or, in my opinion, shatter the effect if you aren't, being so matter-of-factly as it is.
I don't know which reaction you were looking for.
Other than that, nicely written.

[WhiteWillow]

An imperfect love is hard to let go of, even though you know its not right. It may take a few times, but making mistakes allows you to know when the time is right. Lovely write.

[Brenden Moran]

I have always enjoyed poems like these. Few ideas for you, I would suggest that you choose your words more carefully. How can you compact them into better words? How can you make it flow better? How can you draw in the reader with something new? -->very important. Consider these things. Also, don't repeat words you have already said. E.g. I can't see PAST the facade, PAST the hugs and kisses and hollow promises. Those really throw off the flow and jumble up the reader. Read your stuff aloud.