Waiting for…

Restlessly vexed

preoccupied with

how long

 

Living 

if called that

mostly standing still

 

Curious about the view

of a life on hold

wishing hourly

 

For more minutes

that turn into hours

that become a lifetime

 

Now with a glance

over the shoulder

a colourless vista

 

Of time spent

wishing

as life was put on hold

 

What to do

with the next

tomorrows

 

Can old patterns

be broken

can old feet move forward

 

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'Waiting for...'
MCS,
The ideas given drive along into a feeling of why and how does one move into another reality when the one known is gone. That is no easy place to be. This felt like a time of challenge and yet the desire to address it and to make a change. I appreciate this honest poem of what feels difficult yet expressing the raw feeling behind the words.
Blessings to you.
kathy

[MCS]

Kathy, always a delight to see you and your words are so honest and to the point. Thank you :)

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Your very welcome and I hope you are doing well in your life.

[MCS]

Thank you
You're always so very kind, its appreciated

[Sami Khalil]

Curiosity and anxiousness drives us crazy waiting for someone or something...A very good write...I like the format too...:)...........